Monday 8 October 2012

Nature.



So you built your houses, harvested your food,
earned your wealth and bore your brood.
You sold your sweat, and tears for a cost,
never a thought to the one who really lost.

Now as you rest in your final recline,
With empty hearts, hands that never declined,
The hour has come, to repay your debt,
I am Nature, you owe me a death.

-Askios

2 comments:

  1. When I started reading I found it just another rhyming piece; but the last line really got me. Short but really, strong.

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  2. Hey Oly, thanks for reading :)
    Yeah, to be frank myself seldom consider any 'poem' I write, to be anything more than just another rhyme scheme. But, aren't we all learning? :) I'm really glad you liked Nature, hope to get better.

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